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My new song...

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I wrote a new song today called "In My Mind" and thought I would share my demo of it with people. :-) It is not the best of demos as there are a few mistakes in there but you may get an idea about the song!! You can click on the link below to download it and the lyrics are below. Let me know what you think of it but don't be too cruel!! :-) LOL

ftp://blue:[email protected]/In_My_Mind.zip (2.5MB)


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Inside My Mind (Words & Music by Keith Jordan)
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Tomorrow never seemed so far away,
pondering on these words you gave to me.
I never ever realised how I felt,
so into my world I go inside my mind

Staring at your soul through your eyes.
Your smiling face now seen in a different light.
You face the sun so the darkness falls behind you.
So into your world you go inside your mind.

Thou shalt not be alone anymore
Entereth thy kingdom of infinite light
We walk together through this barren land
and now your race is over do you understand?

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Copyright Keith Jordan 2002. All rights reserved.
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Post by Furiouss »

i cant seem to download it, Keith

(or log in for that matter)

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Post by Real Pink in the Inside »

Keith, have you ever heard the song "It's Been Awhile" by Staind?
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Real Pink in the Inside wrote:Keith, have you ever heard the song "It's Been Awhile" by Staind?

Not heard that song. Perhaps the server was off when Furios tried to download it?? :)
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Post by Real Pink in the Inside »

"It's Been Awhile" sounds a little bit musically like your song, Keith. It was a rather big hit here in North America last year. You should download it sometime.
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Post by Real Pink in the Inside »

Keith, I really like your song with full bass and treble on Winamp.

When I first heard your song, my treble and bass settings were quite low, and so the song was not as powerful.

I think it's pretty darn good, man.
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Post by Prkl »

Wow, to be honest for some reason I was expecting it to be crap :oops: , but this is REALLY good! Two thumbs up!
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Post by Keith Jordan »

I have another new song me and 3/4 of my band recorded in my bedroom a few days ago!! It is a rough demo for recording a proper demo!! :D Let me know what you all think of it. It is called Grey Faces and the first verse is repeated twice as we couldn't remember the lyrics when recording and our singer was absent from the session.

ftp://blue:[email protected]/Blue ... _Faces.mp3 (4.53MB)

Right click and select save target as on the link above to save.
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