In 'The Narrow Way', the lyrics are partly mumbled.Hudini wrote:And just for the record, English is also not my first language, but I understand it well enough to know a bad song from a good one. 'Louder Than Words' isn't really bad, but it's also far, far from being good.
By saying that English is not my first language,
I mean that the lyrics of 'The Narrow Way' and 'Louder Than Words' don't distract me very much.
Getting into Barrett's solo work, at the age of 14, I at first thought his lyrics were mostly nonsense.
Also because of lack of knowlegde of the Enligh language.
And even today, parts of Barrett's lyrics are still unclear to almost everyone.
I've seen very bad transcriptions of his lyrics, in print and on internet,
although not always knowing what the good transcription would be.
(My biggest complaint about Barrett is his destruction of his lyrics book.)
Anyway, what exactly are good lyrics?
'Sheep' (1977) has good lyrics, but the vocal line sounds as if Waters is just reading a book,
making it sound like he is "reading a booooooooooooooook".
The long syllables at the end of the lines, and the synthetic effect on them,
just hide that there really isn't much of a vocal line there.
I think it's the instrumentation and the effects that make it a song.
(Although it's one of the highlights on the album for me. The others being the 'Pigs on the Wing' parts.)
Lots of people praise Bob Dylan for his great lyrics.
And I think a 1970s parody by John Lennon shows how songs can suffer by having a lot to say:
John Lennon - News of the Day (Parody of Bob Dylan)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tgDtHlD4KP8
For a good song, in a traditional sense of needing only a good vocal line and no instruments,
like just singing under the shower,
I'd say the rule "music comes first" is very important.
This way, I'd rather sing some nonsense nursery rhyme or some silly love song
than getting "stuck inside of a lexicon" - to quote Lennon in that parody.
The best, of course, is a perfect balance between good vocal lines and good lyrics.
But, getting older and maybe wiser, such compositions are less common than I thought.